I didn't say that I saw the back of the crank pin contacting the pickup strip (mine wasn't shorting). But it looked like a likely culprit (if the pin was just a scoobitch longer). I also did not disassemble anything - just observed the loco running slowly upside down nested in a cradle.
Since dismantling N scale locos (and lots of other subminiature work) is a big part of my hobby, I have *LOTS* of light over my workbench and all sorts of magnifying implements. I have no problems seeing anything (even black on black items). I have more problem threading the screws back in the holes. I can see them jost fine, but my hands are no longer rock steady like they were when I was in my 30s.
The main crankpin looks like a metal lost-wax casting to me. It is actually well made (similar to what is used in brass locos). Like Max said - it probably was not snipped off the sprue correctly, making it extra long. There are several other nice metal castings in this model (including the smokebox front).