Hi Guys, thanks to one and all, always appreciate the comments. I've already started on a second one, the nice thing about these Masonite panels is, they are cheap and not part of the layout so if you don't like the results it's easy just to start again.
Tom, that is a great pic, and you've inspired my new technique: do a project first, then try to find a similar-looking proto pic and say, "Yeah, I meant to do that!"

Actually tho my painted mountains are supposed to represent those same ones in your pic that are just above the right-hand marker, and from pretty much the same perspective too

They actually are not quite as far away as those most distant ones in your pic, but those far ones would certainly be there on a full-length, 'real' backdrop.
Gary that's not a new module, just an old scenery test piece of foam board less than 2'x2' (mostly done to try out the static grass & some grout for soil). You do bring up a good point about not overpowering the models - here is one example that is really kind of getting there (IMHO) (and even tho the models aren't even done, it would be a
really tall order to stand up in front of this kind of backdrop):
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Lennart you are quite right, those distant mountains really aren't actually too far back. I was just at the Loop about 10 days ago and I could see that they are actually 'connected' to the hills in front of them by a ridge that appears rather foreshortened in photos. So it does tend to throw off the sense of scale a bit. Another thing, those hills also have a fair number of rock outcroppings which really aren't too well represented in the painting.
Rod and Scottl you raise a great point about the light/shadow. I'll probably try some of that out on a piece of white cardboard to see if I can make it work. (Don't artists call that sort of thing a "study" or some such term?)

In fact the more I look at it, the more my flat/blob trees are looking like my hills have a case of the 'measles', so I had better figure out a way to improve on this

Hi jimmo thanks for pointing out that part about the one-point perspective. I have that exact problem on my current loop backdrop. That has all of the 'puffball' type of clouds, hopefully going with the less distinct and hazier kinds will be more tolerant of changes in the viewing angle (within limits of course).
Once again thanks to all for looking!

Ed